Prove You Wrong - Comments

  • nearly witches.

    nearly witches. (15250)

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    I'm always impressed by people who can write lyrics, just because I can't do so myself. The general mood I'm getting off of it is the same as myssblyss, it just seems very devil-may-care and in your face and I like that. You've poured a lot of emotion into it and in my opinion, that's what makes the best songs the best.

    You bring across a really important message within this as well and I really do love that. Even the quietest of people has the potential to be massive, and I think that's what I'm taking away from this.

    A few quick grammar/spelling fixes: when you're saying ourself, it should be ourselves as the general line is talking about multiple people (we're) and whose in the second verse, third line should be who's.

    I'll be announcing the winners of the contest within the next week, so good luck! Cute
    July 25th, 2013 at 04:07pm
  • myssblyss

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    Beautiful.
    I like how it's all "in your face, I am who I am. nothing'll change that"
    December 30th, 2011 at 07:43am