Broken Butterflies - Comments

  • MiOTU

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    some people feel the need to drag out what they want to say until the reader looses intrest and moves on. You, on the other hand, are a true writer and know that it's a lot more cutting and personal if you get straight to the point and don't sugar coat it. I like it and think you have amazing talent. so, whatever you do, Don't stop writing!
    January 30th, 2012 at 03:49am
  • OurLullaby

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    AMAZING!
    January 24th, 2012 at 09:09pm
  • Unspoken_Lies

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    Dark, twisted.
    Just my style.
    I like it *scratch that* I love it.
    xD
    January 4th, 2012 at 01:08am
  • aisha_561989

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    amazing love it so much
    December 31st, 2011 at 09:24pm
  • xHopeNotLostx

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    This is my favorite, I can connect to it so well.
    Good Job!
    December 31st, 2011 at 08:44am
  • OnceWasLost

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    I love your style. The words flow so easily and they create a detailed thought. Thanks for writing :D
    December 31st, 2011 at 08:28am
  • ElegantFalcon

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    There's no way I could choose just one of your poems to be my favorite.
    December 31st, 2011 at 06:40am
  • demitri-rose

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    I love this. n.n
    you have amazing talent.
    December 31st, 2011 at 06:28am
  • SonOfStars

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    wow, I love the butterflies + dreams combo. They work well together ^^ (i had to leave a comment because you left so many nice ones on my pages :)
    December 31st, 2011 at 04:43am
  • rambunxouswriter

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    This was seriously amazing.
    December 31st, 2011 at 04:39am
  • Joker;

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    I like this alot keep it up you're really good :)
    December 30th, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • DesmondTiny

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    This is beautifl!!!! Wonderful job.
    December 30th, 2011 at 09:01pm
  • Cheshire Cat92

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    Love it so much! Keep writing 'cause you hage talent!!
    December 30th, 2011 at 08:51pm
  • StaticWolfGirl

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    Wow.... I'm speechless... Great job though! The poem flows amazingly well and you can really feel the emotion of it.
    December 30th, 2011 at 08:26pm
  • doodlef

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    that was deep
    December 30th, 2011 at 08:16pm