Homepage › Poems › Desire's Dream › Comments

Desire's Dream - Comments

  • my sci-fi lullaby.

    my sci-fi lullaby. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    This is amazing. I love the line "your touch my bare back". Keep writing, I love your poetry.
    January 14th, 2012 at 07:42am
  • MetalMelissa

    MetalMelissa (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    I like how you used your words. It creates an image in my mind that almost seems like I'm there. Keep writing : )
    December 30th, 2011 at 10:10pm
Homepage › Poems › Desire's Dream › Comments