Enough to Kill You - Comments

I love this poem! its so well written, your a beautiful poet <3

You write so well..this is just another example of that. Excellent word choice and voice. :)

Good job!! Cant wait to see your next one.

EPIC POEM ur a great poet <3

now THAT's what i call a poem!

That was great!!

this is aewsome. you did a great job here=D

A true masterpiece!

It's a true masterpiece!

I lover this, it's an amazing poem. I can relate exactly to this. I feel for you, great job!

I loved this & I know exactly how that feels. I felt as though I was reliving the past for a second. & I could feel every bit of emotion you conveyed. This was very powerful; well done!

Whoa. I TOTALLY get this. I can feel every ounce of emotion and how every fiber of your being just hates this bitch for taking your man! Once again, very very good!

Wow. Thats a pretty powerful poem. Like.. I could feel your pain, and your anger. I like it :)

It hurts. I know how its like; to see the guy you like/love/care about so much be with a girl that's no good for him. That turns a good man into a bad man. I know how much pain you have inside. You smile as he tells you all the great things he says about her, but you know how she really is; a tramp. You don't say anything because you don't want to lose him. You don't want to feel alone without him, but you'll be there when he gets his heart broken.
I know how it is, and if you want to talk about it, message me. I feel for you.

i know how it feels

Love it. I've been trapped in a relationship similar to the blind idiocy this guy had. I would've given anything for him. Then, with a simple question, my heart turned to stone and my girl friend became my competitor.
I like the way you capture the attention of the reader, because many girls can and do relate.

I like this a lot. the words are almost hypnotizing and i could picture the situation. like a love-hate relationship. You love the Person but hate what he's doing. Atleast thats what I interpretted it as.

this is absolutely darling(: i love the boldness!

Love it when you say "you can't turn a tramp into a wife". Great poem:)

oh by the way it was written wonderfully and fuck that bitch!! lol :)