Momma's Wrong - Comments

  • IndependantKarissa

    IndependantKarissa (100)

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    Very strong Very emotional. Good. constructive Criticism: not enough punctuation. You whole poem is one big run on scentence. You can go the whole poem and only stop three times and it's exhausting. Remember when a line ends that doesn't create a pause. You have to put commas and punctuations in to create a set rhythm
    January 7th, 2012 at 04:59am