Homepage › Poems › Free style! › Comments

Free style! - Comments

  • Haikeru

    Haikeru (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♂
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Netherlands
    It's quite okay.
    But there are quite some spelling mistakes and some lines miss the flow..

    Good luck in further writing!
    January 7th, 2012 at 02:08pm
Homepage › Poems › Free style! › Comments