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  • xXxLizziexXx

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    Our lives have things in common then, thanks.
    January 14th, 2012 at 10:41pm
  • unreality

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    This sounds like my life :/ Beautiful poem!
    January 12th, 2012 at 05:42am
  • xXxLizziexXx

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    Awe thank you guys so much :D I was worried that it was horrible and no one would like it >.< haha. I feel special now(:
    January 8th, 2012 at 10:36pm
  • loveyoursmile

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    This is really good for a first poem! Most people just try to rhym (sp?) every line and call that a poem. I like how it was layed out. Good Job!
    January 8th, 2012 at 08:38pm
  • Joker;

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    This is good Keep writing >:3
    January 8th, 2012 at 08:32pm
  • Plumjk

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    First poem? I like it.. it seams very intense!
    January 8th, 2012 at 07:57pm
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