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  • sultry shay

    sultry shay (100)

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    I really liked this! ^_^ But for some reason I feel like it didn't really end as if it should continue. But that's just me, what do I know? XP... good job :)
    January 16th, 2012 at 04:43am
  • VivaLaVida

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    Really well done... if that was a steak, it be the perfect amount of pink and juiciness. Not close to burnt, yet not close to raw... (sorry if you're a vegetarian)
    January 16th, 2012 at 04:36am
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