To Love Such Sparrows - Comments

  • sainted swan

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    Shannon, I loved this so much. The title is beautiful and the poem was stunning. I think my favorite part was "I can try, it's only child's play if she flies away. molting is not about seduction but she's never transformed truthful colors like this"
    I loved that, bb. Write more poems okay? <3 You're wonderful.
    May 12th, 2012 at 07:31am
  • Shakespeare_lover

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    This is different :)
    Different is good.
    This poem is very good :)
    January 24th, 2012 at 05:51am