Silly Little Dreams - Comments

  • HowlingHale

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    a masterpiece, really. full of emotion, mixing rhymes with lines that don't rhyme and still keeping a structure. the imagery and atmoshpere your words create is chilling and sad and the last line really rings out. nice work! :]
    September 17th, 2012 at 07:57pm
  • MayaAngelou0524

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    I hav three ways of describing things:

    1) That made me melt!

    2) That was so good I wanted to curl up and die!

    & my favorite 3) That was sexy!

    Your poem was all THREE!!! Amazing!!!
    July 18th, 2012 at 06:01am
  • juliet's poison

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    this is truly beautiful. Would you mind if i use it for a song im working on?
    March 16th, 2012 at 04:15pm
  • RosieTyler256

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    BREATHTAKING as usual ;)
    February 4th, 2012 at 11:15pm
  • sultry shay

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    truly... B E A U T I F U L ! :) <3
    February 1st, 2012 at 03:45am
  • Avec Moi

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    oh wow ! i love it
    February 1st, 2012 at 12:20am
  • rag.doll

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    this is beautiful. well done.
    February 1st, 2012 at 12:03am