i know im commenting again but i have to say the first bit with the rhyme scheme blew me away and then all the long sentences were like beyond unbelievable so just had to tell ya!
This was such an awesome little read! Sounds like a freestyle rap or has the potential to be a hit song lol i feel bad for whoever that was about because you really have a way with words and i wouldnt wanna be on the receiving end of that personally but again i gotta say this was an epic piece of writing <3
Verbal Rapist Me :P haha
Thank you for the amazing comment XD xxx