The Birth of Music - Comments

I've never read a poem with so much underlying emotions at all. I did Literature this year, and I'm being honest when I say that my Literature Teacher and I would have a ball trying to analyze this piece. I say, 9/10 stars.

Wow! You're a really good poet. That's all I can say. Thump, thwack, thwomp. :)

excellent. very very well written. i can definitely feel a distinct rhythm as im reading, which is crucial in any work dealing with music. like any musician, the poem speaks partly in words and partly in rhythm/harmonics/onamotapeias (sp?). heavy nature imagery underlines the basic connections between music and nature. overall, a great pleasure to read.