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  • Darkest Moon

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    This is very good i enjoyed the flow ... like a river lost in time.
    anyways she wont get past the last door of your labrinthian mind unless you show her the way forward and the key that opens the lock
    March 6th, 2012 at 11:47pm
  • Yoshi.

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    I think this flowed fairly well.
    I enjoyed reading it. C:
    February 21st, 2012 at 01:28am
  • Monstertea

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    This is so good I like the flow ... And no she can't only you can open that door for her if you wish to
    February 20th, 2012 at 09:45pm
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