wow. Just wow. Why am i the first commenter? This is AMAZING! And im not just saying that for the hell of it, it actually is. There's so much depth in your words, and the poem flows so well. There's the perfect amount of structure so the poem doesnt look too messy and not too neat either. I had so many favourite bits. Umm i love your wording on the line that says ''fuzzy guts on the floor'' i love how you personified the padding in the room as if to suggest the insanity derived from sociopathy. The last two stanzas were phenominally written, I feel like applauding your talent just like people applaud ballet dancers, opera singers and theatre thespians. Well done. This piece is more magnificent than words could describe.
February 24th, 2012 at 05:20pm