Soul keeper - Comments

This is really pretty- the only thing I would change if I could would be the last line. I think 'an eternal token' would sound cool. 'As a token' is still AWESOME though :)

this is really good.. at the end it seems like there could be more and it leaves you wanting more.. I love the depth of it.. I write a lot about the "shadows"..I loved it! and i will def be reading more of yours.. :)