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  • one step forward

    one step forward (100)

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    try thinking from your friends point of view. how she felt about what she did. but you do have every right to feel hurt. good poem i liked it a lot.
    March 19th, 2012 at 04:12am
  • poetryluver

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    Very powerful and emotional. The last line kind of doesnt go with the mood though. maybe follow it up with another stanza to make it flow a tad bit better. I love it though
    March 15th, 2012 at 09:55pm
  • Grandiose Delusions

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    wow...deep...I can relate to this about a semi-friend of mine.
    March 15th, 2012 at 04:26pm
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