Prisoner - Comments

This is absolutely beautiful <3 I'm so awful at poetry, I would kill to be able to write this well. (:

Wow I love this! You can feel the confliction and raw emotion in it. Great job!

Wow! This is amazing. You are a GREAT writer!

This is great :) I like it a lot

This is my favorite poem of yours. Captured the emotion very well. c:

I love it so much. I think anyone and everyone can relate to it as well. It's just...pure amazing.

This is beautifully written! The imagery is excellent. The repetition was brilliantly used! I felt the emotion. Amazing work! I plan to read your others very soon!!

Okay, I freely admit I know next to nothing about poetry, but I thought this poem was AMAZING.

My only quarrel with this is the fluidity/sentence breaks I didn't think they where always smooth and perhaps it was intentional but for me it kinda subtracted from things a bit but who knows I could reread this in a different mood and think it's perfect. Anyways the poem is still good and the imagery here is the strong point it's definitely vivid and what stands out most to me. I like the manic sensation and the way things sorta seem to jump out at you like you feel like you're in the room with this person while reading it that you're truly experiencing them.

Wow! You have captured those emotions, images, and the theme very well. You have a gift for words. I think we have all felt like a prisoner, trapped in own minds and body. If you still feel like this I think you would be interested in the song lyrics I've posted on my profile. They might help. Anyway, back to the poetry: This is simply and amazing piece of art!! Keep writting!!

You're amazing love (: