Little Fender - Comments

This seems like a very deep poem (if it's not a song, because it very well sounds like a song). The emotion here is very raw, and you've conveyed your thoughts fairly well. The description is pretty and flows beautifully, and this poem really has a voice. I enjoyed reading this (( :

That was so sweet.
I can completely relate to this.

all I have to say is beautiful. this is so well written! I love love love this. amazing.

Beautiful :) As a guitar player myself, I can relate to this completely. I just got a Les Paul that I almost had to beg for, and now I can't put it down.

I love love love this! It was so cute! I love music, and I definitely feel some kind of connection to my drums. So, I really understand and enjoy how this made a connection. Again, this had great flow. I really enjoyed it!

Beautiful : )

I really like this I like it when musicians have that personal connection with their instruments. Mine I kinda consider like friends or people >.>. Very well written the only possible mistake was I think you mean more than I could afford and just forgot to put [i]more[/i]. It sorta reminded me how Hendrix wrote a prayer on his guitar before he sacrificed it on stage cause it was important to him.

I honestly wondered until halfway through if you where possibly talking about a car ^-^;

This makes me want to pick up one. This is really well written and I enjoyed reading it alot.