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Yeah I've always loved poetry and poets and yes i thought it was about time i started to actually write my own but Thank you i'm glad you like it :D

This is your first attempt at poetry? I can't believe it! This is really good. My very first attempt at poetry...well it wasn't very well written. But this is awesome! You should definitely keep writing.

Thank you :) and i've always loved poetry so i thought i'd give it a go

Man, this is deep, but it's written really well. Hard situation to deal with, I can relate.