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  • BeMyEscape;

    BeMyEscape; (100)

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    Funny that now...

    Several months after you wrote this...
    i could say the same damn thing.
    December 22nd, 2007 at 11:30am
  • x__SaltyEyes

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    really really really good.

    would you hate me if i try to correct some things for you?? i'd like to help :D

    Why is it everytime I pick myself up I fall?
    Why is it that when I say I love you, you turn away?
    Why do you whisper words to me and go and change your mind?

    Why must you play games with my mind?
    Why do I have to be stupid [b]and[/b] fall for you?
    Why do I keep dragging myself down?

    These are what you left me with.
    [b]An[/b] empty head and a broken heart.
    Why do you have to [b]inflict[/b] so much pain on me?

    My thoughts keep going back to you
    All the things that we went through.
    My thoughts fill of you.
    But yet you broke my heart in two.

    Why does it always end up back at you?
    Why am I back at square one?

    I am tired of these whys.
    I am breaking free.
    No more you.
    You hurt me more than you can know
    At least you wont have a hold of this heart [b]anymore[/b].
    XoXo,
    Steph

    **corrections are in bold. i hope you dont take it the wrong way. just trying to help :D
    April 18th, 2007 at 03:03am
  • fallenleaves

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    Wow I like it!
    March 24th, 2007 at 03:26pm
  • WritingMyLifeAway

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    ooooooohhhhhhhhhhh
    i like
    March 24th, 2007 at 12:50pm
  • Skittlemeister.

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    wow...i can totally relate.
    total awesomeness.
    March 24th, 2007 at 07:11am
  • RayRay; forgotten

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    Wow, I really like this.
    It made me feel it.
    I love it.
    ~RayRay Smiley
    March 24th, 2007 at 06:11am