Through the Raven's Eye - Comments

I really like this poem! It has a smooth feel to it, although I think some lines could have been expressed better. But I like the "souls beneath the wings" thing, that was cool. You should write more poems! :D

This is a very interesting point of view. I loved the possibility of freedom from the darkness and negativity at the end. Thank you for entering this in Mibba's poetry contest!