its good however, I think that if you broke this up into stanzas
or even into groups of lines that maybe are a little larger or smaller than the average stanza it would help the flow & format of the poem
I still love your imagery, and the way you used all caps to make certain lines stand out above others really draws the reader in & makes it more powerful
Well done
or even into groups of lines that maybe are a little larger or smaller than the average stanza it would help the flow & format of the poem
I still love your imagery, and the way you used all caps to make certain lines stand out above others really draws the reader in & makes it more powerful
Well done