Goes the Clock. - Comments

This is really interesting. I was like but wait what? (Minion voice).

I had no idea what to expect, but I love how this progressed into something more eerie and darker. Nice work!

My sort of thing. Time and the end of it. Brilliant.

I like how this started out sounding like it's probably going to be a peaceful little poem, something a bit fun, and then how it got darker as it went, with the repetition building up suspense until those last two lines, which made for a pretty powerful ending. You used the repetition very well, and every time I read it I get a little nervous at the end, so you certainly related a feeling. Nice job! :)