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  • Nagato

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    @ AnneAlysse
    Thank you I will give that into consideration for the next time :) sorry late reply
    September 9th, 2012 at 09:07am
  • AnneAlysse

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    A very nice poem! I especially enjoyed the imagery it brought to mind, how it was peaceful while still being emotionally intense. It would have been a bit easier to get through with more punctuation, though, so it wouldn't hurt to give it a quick edit if you have the chance. :)
    May 24th, 2012 at 01:02am
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