The White Rose Garden - Comments

okay I'm pretty sure I wanna go burn all of the poems I had written after reading this cause your poem just blew mine all away lol. It was absolutely beautiful. Totally transported me into another world. I loved all of it but my favorite part had to be 'and now you still linger on faraway dreams, desires that hinder, the truth of those seams' and 'pretense like no other, a beautiful sight, a mind cursed to wander, in sorrowful white' oh and 'a garden forgotten, by winter and fall, though empty and rotten, one pitiful wall' to me those three verses really spoke to me. Absolutely beautiful!

This is truly beautiful. The imagery is so vivid. I really like it, I think this is one of my new favorite poems. It gives me the impression of a lonely wanderer, having lost something truly dear.