This is one of the best poems I've read on Mibba. I don't say that lightly, I really mean it. There is so much emotion put into this, I can't even comprehend how you could capture this so perfectly. Everything about this poem is fantastic: your diction, the subtle rhyme, the pure and raw emotion that I'm sure so many people can relate to. I love how you incorporated the title into the actual poem a few times, that really adds to the overall effect. In general, fantastic. I love this everything about this poem.
May 15th, 2012 at 08:46pm