Staring Off Into Space - Comments

  • x__SaltyEyes

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    "I am staring off into space.
    My mind not focusing at all.
    I am lost in these fears.
    That keep me locked in my mind."

    thats my favorite part. ;] good poem.
    April 18th, 2007 at 02:59am
  • Ironic death?

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    wait did your mom really like get killed?
    March 25th, 2007 at 05:52am
  • Ironic death?

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    I like this poem alot
    its very very emotional I love it
    it shows great feeling!
    Happy you should put more poems up!
    March 25th, 2007 at 05:51am
  • PianistGone4Biscuit

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    i really liked the emotions in this poem.
    They run through it really well.
    Also liked the repetition of the end.
    im so sorry to hear about your mother.
    March 25th, 2007 at 01:37am