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  • cherry kisses.

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    This so delicate and sweet.
    I love it, my dear.
    May 24th, 2012 at 06:00am
  • Dreamer5009

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    This poem is the very incarnation of desire and sums up perfectly how it makes you feel and think. Very nicely done!
    April 30th, 2012 at 06:30am
  • ber1110

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    Well that's adorable :)

    Just some errors: when using "" punctuation goes inside. And for the arms yearning for m--this person to be in their reach it should be "its" not "it's."
    That is all :)
    April 30th, 2012 at 05:26am
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