My Vanilla Sky - Comments

omg..yeah i dont know you but this poem is soooo good =D
omgeee!
amazing..

Its great!!

This is amazing! I love it!

love the description

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i love this.
<3

Wow *stares in awe*


This wicked cool and uber awsome

I don’t think either of us knew what a poet you really are, little brother.

I’m not going to give you a review because I start rambling too easily. So I’m just going to say that I think you’re poem is fanatic. One reason why? I had to reread it four or five times before I really got it. And I like when I don’t instantly understand a poem completely right away but still am able to figure it out after a little while. Because to me it’s pointless if it’s completely obvious what the poet wants to say or if it’s impossible to ever understand [i]at all[/i].

And the con-crit would be that maybe you should use punctuation. It really helps the flow and makes your poem easier to read. ^-^ Also, capitalize the ‘s’ in ‘sky’ in the title. And perhaps next time you could try to avoid repetition more than you have done now. It’s not anything that really takes away from the poem this time but it could just have easily have been too much, know what I’m saying?

Ah, darn. I semi-failed at keeping this comment short. Oh well. x ]