The Leader's of Roanoke - Comments

it's actually a song that i wrote a while back. it sounds good on guitar. i have it on my ipod but unfortunately i don't think i can get it on my computer from there. if i can find a way, i'll ask you for your email and i'll email it to you. and sorry, i just copied and pasted the lyrics from notepad where i just jotted them down to be able to read along while i was playing.

I like the chorus and it has a nice little tune in my head but you should check for some grammar mistakes (i'll vs. I'll, capitalize the beginning of the lines, periods, etc.),

I like the chorus and it has a nice little tune in my head but you should check for some grammar mistakes (i'll vs. I'll, capitalize the beginning of the lines, periods, etc.),