Choice's - Comments

fiji_guurl (100)

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lol sorry I'm only 13 :$

May 13th, 2012 at 05:22am

Lmnop (100)

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I didn't want to comment on this because you said "I'll comment on one of yours" and that seemed like bribery which would make my comment less genuine, but I read it and I actually really liked it :] It had good flow.

May 12th, 2012 at 05:12am

A Savage God Reigns (100)

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I liked it because it's relatable, but you're grammar isn't the best.
The line: "which choice shall be choose." didn't quite make sense.

May 12th, 2012 at 05:06am

abigail. (400)

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It's very relatable. I really like it.
The only thing I can critique on this is watching the grammar/spelling :D

May 12th, 2012 at 04:56am