Choice's - Comments

lol sorry I'm only 13 :$

I didn't want to comment on this because you said "I'll comment on one of yours" and that seemed like bribery which would make my comment less genuine, but I read it and I actually really liked it :] It had good flow.

I liked it because it's relatable, but you're grammar isn't the best.
The line: "which choice shall be choose." didn't quite make sense.

It's very relatable. I really like it.
The only thing I can critique on this is watching the grammar/spelling :D