Pain Everywhere - Comments

Is this the one you wanted me to read? In any case, it's good. I think the mother-daughter-cutting thing is the most logical conclusion. I just sounded really weird, but yeah. Good stuff.

Intruiging and amazing :D
I love it, and I can't wait to see it in story form. I'm sure it will be outstanding. And thats an interesting idea. People write often on a p.o.v of a cutter themselves but no one ever writes from the perspective of someone viewing the cutter.
Brilliant bro. I like it. :3

Good. It captures the uncertainty of people watching a cutter pretty good. Perhaps if you went into a little more detail about exactly what the mother is feeling, adding something about seeing the cuts and not knowing...that might be better. Check out my poem Locked Up for a different perspective maybe (its on page 5)...

But its good. I like it! :).