For My Spoken Word Poetry - Comments

Just be checking my page if anything. Thanks again(:

Thanks for the comments, I really apppreciate it. It's only about 1/4 of the way done, maybe less. I'll update this soon when I get more inspiration and maybe I'll record myself performing it.

this is really good. same situation that went on wit me nd my friend, only its a guy not girl lol.

Awesome poem. You have described how I feel when my 'so called' friends would do when they find themselves in trouble they would come to me for help and I offer them advice but they never listen to me and end up making the same mistake again. I am done being nice to them. If you have these sort of people in your life dont give them anymore advice let them fall and try and pick themselves up.