My Lover - Comments

  • LostinTime

    LostinTime (200)

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    I really, really like this poem. I love how you repeat "My lover he waits for me" and the build up at the ending really sold it for me.
    May 29th, 2012 at 02:09am
  • LostinTime

    LostinTime (200)

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    I really, really like this poem. I love how you repeat "My lover he waits for me" and the build up at the ending really sold it for me.
    May 29th, 2012 at 02:09am