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  • Mr.Sunshine

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    This was so good, and beautiful. You are such an amazing writer. You have this perfect way with words.
    May 31st, 2012 at 02:39am
  • Aria T'Loak

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    Ugh, I love your poetry so freaking much. This was positively beautiful and I just want to snuggle it forever and always. o.o; Is this what you wrote for that contest on ETW? I wish that place wasn't dead. Maybe I'll put it up as a contest on DAU or something. IT'S SO UGH FADOSHGRF.

    I do have one problem with it - I think you should remove the comma from the last line. I don't think it needs a pause there. Think

    But yeah, that's the only thing I can say...

    BECAUSE IT'S SO FREAKING GOOD.
    May 30th, 2012 at 09:23pm
  • uwee33

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    Very nice.
    May 30th, 2012 at 06:46pm
  • fifteenwishes101

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    so dark! and good :)
    May 30th, 2012 at 12:21pm
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