Forest Creatures - Comments

Wow, this is really good. I love dark writing

wow incredible

I can feel it like I feel the emotion in your writing. I'm not sure how long this took you to write, but I love it. I think you made a mistake on the word brown though. You might want to look over it. But I love this, it's really good. I hope you do start to write poetry too, it's really good. Something happened when you were in your mama's belly, because your creativity glands are waaaaaaayyyy to big for someone our age. It's rare that you find this creative of a thirteen year old. I love it, and I love you and all your creativeness.

Someone running scared through a foggy-ish forest, from something they can only hope will never catch up to them. But it does, and yet they don't fear anymore.

Again, excellent job on you usage of words. The pictures I get are so vivid, it's like a little scene playing out in my head. Plus, at the part about the moss, I actually thought I smelled moss. For serious.

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