I know it sounds unrealistic, but i was hooked on this poem from the first sentence. You have a way with words, I could not stop reading and as I was reading, i remembered die hard 4.0, the idea of 'the fire sale' came to mind and I'd always thought it was an interesting concept because if it happened, we'd be screwed, just like you wrote, we're too dependent on tech. Great poem, there was so much detail, it was like reading a description in a book.
Reading this, I was reminded of that animated movie 9. I guess it was because I watched it recently, but I thought the message was very potent. I completely agree.