The Road Not Taken - Comments

I love it! :) The structure of it is really nice. It's uncommon to read poems which are set up like interactions between people, using dialogue, so it's refreshing. That's really difficult, too, because you have to be careful about the rhymes. A little awkwardness is okay normally, but if it's dialogue, it's a little more disruptive. But you did a great job with keeping the rhyming smooth! Excellent work.

this is nice ^^
and i love the way it's all spoken

I don't know how you do it, but you just did again! I love it :)

Another great poem :) you really exemplified the meaning of that quote in this poem