Wow this is really imaginitive and well written. Good job 
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The Kingdom Beneath the Sea - Comments
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It had that eerie, solemn fear, as if the narrator only know about the kingdom under the sea because he/she was once apart of it, and they, being immortal and wiser than the others, escaped as it slowly decayed and corrupted itself. I liked this poem a lot.January 26th, 2013 at 05:47pm
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That was really good and I enjoyed reading it. The words you used really painted a picture of the sinister place in my mind
Also thank you for the costume idea! October 28th, 2012 at 04:13pm -
Wow. I like all the imagery. I can literally see each stanza appear before me. Seems like a scary little place. ;)July 17th, 2012 at 05:01pm
