The Kingdom Beneath the Sea - Comments

Wow this is really imaginitive and well written. Good job x x

It had that eerie, solemn fear, as if the narrator only know about the kingdom under the sea because he/she was once apart of it, and they, being immortal and wiser than the others, escaped as it slowly decayed and corrupted itself. I liked this poem a lot.

That was really good and I enjoyed reading it. The words you used really painted a picture of the sinister place in my mind Also thank you for the costume idea!

Wow. I like all the imagery. I can literally see each stanza appear before me. Seems like a scary little place. ;)