Alone - Comments

Wow. This is beautifully written, and I can absolutely feel what the narrator of the poem is feeling. Your ability to emote is fantastic.

I'm having a hard time with this poem. Not because it's not well written, it's very well written. I'm having a hard time because I can relate to her, whoever she is. I can relate to the gossip in the first paragraph, the boy lying in the second, the hatred and loathing in the third, the loneliness and silence in the fourth. It's all so real to me and I can't say what's amazing about it, but it's just great. How you can write something that I can relate to without even knowing me is crazy. Great job ;)