What About Me? - Comments

a7x.Sick.Puppie.x (100)

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I love this! I like how the first stanza and last stanza link together. It's no longer asking the person to 'hold them' or 'love them' etc, it's saying how they want things to be. At first I was just like 'They both have four lines and both stanzas rhyme' but then when I really looked at them I saw how they all linked together :)
I liked it.
And I'm a sucker for rhymes so I loved all of them too haha

June 19th, 2012 at 07:49pm

yanniboo123 (100)

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I Love This Its Really Good :)

June 14th, 2012 at 02:47am

MayaAngelou0524 (100)

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Amazing!

June 13th, 2012 at 09:56pm

Guardian_0131 (100)

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I love this poem, I can relate to it, and it just draws me to read it again and again.

June 13th, 2012 at 02:46am