I love this! I like how the first stanza and last stanza link together. It's no longer asking the person to 'hold them' or 'love them' etc, it's saying how they want things to be. At first I was just like 'They both have four lines and both stanzas rhyme' but then when I really looked at them I saw how they all linked together :) I liked it. And I'm a sucker for rhymes so I loved all of them too haha
I liked it.
And I'm a sucker for rhymes so I loved all of them too haha