There's loads of pairs of lines (don't know what they're called) that really made me think 'wow, that's clever' in this one xD I think my favorite is this one though: "Eyes widened to the brim of mere sanity Where the hell is humanity?" I like that. When I was reading it, the stanza with "what to do? what to say?" at the start was like a chorus to a song for me xD I read all the other bits as verses and then imagined that coming in with more power and force, not sure why. Might've been the questions haha The dream and scream rhyme was really good to. Created the exact image you were looking for... If the image was someone waking up screaming, which I assume it was? lol
I think my favorite is this one though: "Eyes widened to the brim of mere sanity
Where the hell is humanity?"
I like that.
When I was reading it, the stanza with "what to do? what to say?" at the start was like a chorus to a song for me xD
I read all the other bits as verses and then imagined that coming in with more power and force, not sure why. Might've been the questions haha
The dream and scream rhyme was really good to. Created the exact image you were looking for... If the image was someone waking up screaming, which I assume it was? lol