Eliza Roes - Comments

This is dark, but beautifully written; the rhyme scheme is perfect and not a word seems out of place. I'm getting a kind of classical-ish-overcast vibe from it (that makes no sense, sorry 'bout that) and just overall this is amazingly written. :)

I like that poem. It's depressing, but sometimes depressing is good.
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