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  • horsie890

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    Maybe try to make it a little longer, or at least redo the format so it looks less like an essay and more like a poem. Not that I have anything against essays. Even though I hate them. With a vengeance.
    March 26th, 2007 at 08:10am
  • Feed the Fire

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    I like.... but it probably doesn't count 'cause I wrote it!
    March 26th, 2007 at 05:37am
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