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  • XlostXsoulX

    XlostXsoulX (100)

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    Wonderful.
    great poem.
    i to agree with nsky.
    :)
    April 3rd, 2008 at 11:08pm
  • Alice In Wonderland?

    Alice In Wonderland? (105)

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    I LIKE it, but you haven't put any stanzas here. That's why the reader isn't able to digest one idea before the next hits him/her. I think your poem's pretty good, just requires stanzas and a bit of editing. ( :
    April 3rd, 2008 at 05:05pm
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