Sweetest Poison - Comments

this is amazing! and true...can i use this for any break ups i may have? lol, seriously.

this is realllyyy good.

and i love the last two lines.
how you wrote this poem reminds me of the poem i wrote, You Help Me Breathe. it has two lines at the end that don't fit in perfectly...but i think that in both yours and mine that those last two lines are very important.
though it may not all fit together, the message is relevant.

^_^ Omfg.
It's so awesome!
Very well done. *Nod*

i love it

I love it. ^.^ tis' awesome.

Thats the word I was looking for, stanza, your a smartie.
And thanks. I hope my english teacher likes it.

ooo i really like it!!
i like the last stanza {er phrase er w/e its called} alot

its...like..bleh idk how to describe it!! {its not bleh tho lol}
but it makes an impact
<3