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D187824 (100)

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nice poem. the first three lines are captivating.

VV i agree about the last line, though

July 21st, 2012 at 06:43pm
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I understand, I am not a fan of those kind of lines either, but I said it was a little harsh.
And I think it fit in quite well..

July 21st, 2012 at 05:16pm
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i like it...but im not really fond of the last line

July 21st, 2012 at 04:59pm

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